In writing our classroom were learning to paint a picture in the readers minds of a place that is very special to us.
Bennetts descriptive piece is below:
Rainbows End
Happiness and excitement fill the atmosphere as I enter the gates.
Rides around me come alive with an explosion of colour.
Big signs warn me of the rides to come; penetrating deep into my stomach.
People play on the rides screaming, laughing, and having fun.
By Bennett Marsters
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